12 Jan 2006
closer than ever
im trying to smilethinking
i want to go past
that dreaded mile.
im trying to walk
slowly
cutting up my tongue
as i talk.
im trying to live
knowing
it would be easier
to go the opposite way.
zainab bhatti
zaza at 11:26 am
6comments
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at January 12, 2006
said... hey deeeep stuff :)
good writing .. i need some tips to polish mine can you help...
thumbsup!-
at January 12, 2006
said...
heyyy there know how u feel ...sohail doesnt need polishing anythign ive read his stuff its pretty good keep it up both ov u!!
td-
at January 12, 2006
said...
man thats heavy stuff...
but wouldnt it be easy to take a cab instead of walking?-
at January 12, 2006
zaza said... sohail: dude, i owe u one n u know it..so il help anytime!
td: tankoooo!
anon: i dont do cabs, coz theres usually a perv drivin it!-
at January 12, 2006
Mr. Khurram said...
It's Pretty hard to jump into Ocean, Specially words' ocean. Lets see...
God bless you....-
at January 13, 2006
said...
BC: ive jumped and drowned woo! :)
saeed: why oh why.