25 Oct 2007

the world. as i know it.

There is a sun
That caresses us with optimistic rays
So strong, almost blinding

There are seas
Deeper than the careful cuts across your skin
Showing us life that lives within

There are stars
Never dull and always shining
There are clouds
Trying to maintain their silver lining
Slowly fading away

There are trees
That reflect the colour of envy
Waiting to be uprooted
And running out of patience

There are people
Who utter words that wound your soul
And leave it bleeding

And then, out of the masses, there is one
Who makes you complete,
Who is your everything, from head to feet
Who holds a place second to God,

Who lives in a mansion
On your Memory Lane.

Zainab Bhatti

zaza at 3:42 pm

6 angels shot me

6comments

at October 26, 2007 Blogger c e e d y said...

Interesting poem.....
Life is a very strange journey. When you feel comfortable it brings in the surprises in form of distress - when you are down and out - it still brings surprises in form of little happiness.
I dont know if you got my earlier comment - if you need help with the pic - I can do it for you. You can email me the original one you had yesterday - I will alter it and send it back. IF you like it use it.

 
at October 26, 2007 Blogger Ashu said...

Wonderful!!!

 
at October 26, 2007 Blogger the cloud with the bronze lining said...

hey nice way of expressing things.. rock on!!
ps-chk my blog out sumtime

 
at October 26, 2007 Blogger jaalijojo said...

beautiful... absolutely beautiful.

 
at October 26, 2007 Blogger zazafeefi said...

ceedy: thanks very much for commenting, ive linked u up..and ive sent u de pic, see what u can do with it.

ashu: thanka youa

the cloud: thanks, i will! il link u up

jaali: thanks verry much :)

 
at November 06, 2007 Anonymous Aadil said...

Absolutely amazing! A nice way to describe different aspects of life....

Keep it up!

 

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